me and the bassline
are not friends.
the thump thump thump thump throughout the song just seems to stand out to me, maybe replace the bassline sample or perhaps add some variation or melody to it so it helps add dynamics to the song. Overall it sounds great though, its just that bassline that bothers me. It feels bland D=
Who knows maybe its personal preference.
well now
skela if envy's work is garbage then you're a fucking landfill in comparison. I will admit its not a favorite of mine but its not crap by any means.
and ill join the bandwagon and say i bumped it .017 (some people cant do math)
great job man keep it up!
erm well.
personally i enjoyed the simplicity of the demo more than any of the final versions that ive heard. I think this is one of those songs that you mastered the hell out of and ruins the overall effect of the song. Its overcomplicated, which is a major turn off for me personally. The original melody is almost nonexistent now it feels. Idk i just really didnt enjoy the massive amounts of layering you added.
effort is a 10/10 but the song is overdone, overcooked, burnt, w/e you wanna call it.
hmmm
for some reason i really liek this one...good beat, could see a short film being made with this beat. It sounds familiar. Needs some variation with the main melody though.
good lead
that "activate" sample is a bit ....out of place, and this could definitely use some EQ and some better panning. Its not bad but drums are insanely overpowering, and its drowning out the entire song. In fact....drop the drums lol. just make this a trance song.
i can hear something good somewhere inside the song, you just gotta let it come out!
first of all: thanks for review and 7,
second: ye i heard it too from Morgan King ( also on NG, take a look if you got time :p ) that my drum was really hard clipping, but i couldn't hear it because i made in on my laptop, my excuse for that :p :D
third: EQ and Mastering i need to do too, but i didn't had time for taking a look how to do it ( exams etc)
fourth and last: about drop the drums, you think it would be much better then, as a trance song, with just a kick and that things, ? it could be, never tried :D
I'll take a look how it will be then :p, maybe it is a good idea yea ;-)
I'll give you a pm when i tried something out ;-)
my excuses again for the crazy going drum lol :D
Grts
Fredgy
it felt empty, but not bad
the overall beat needed more prominence but i like the whole epic effect you seem to be throwing my way. Felt somewhat repetitive as well.
a solid 8/10
4/5
i think it needs something more, it does sounds kinda empty a i siad im not really satisfied with this one, but fuggin east west consumed 2 gigs of ram lol so i had to be careful
anyways thanks alot we appreciate your words
this guy is a NUB!
you redefine what the word nub means. And by that, it means amazing and brilliant. Your style is unparalleled by anyone. Your work is truly unique and for that I'm giving this a 10/10. You give new life to Oscillist's song.
(+ 0.016) 5/5
amazing
fast paced metal, another rose masterpiece! I know if i was a flash artist i would use this in a game! you're probably my favorite artisit of all time. Theres nothing i can critique about this, its just way too epic and perfectly done.
(+ 0.032) 5/5
10/10
Thanks! And am I really? that's pretty flattering lol :D
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the scores and review :)
ROFL
this is epic
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