karlsazn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(DJ-T) Sleeping]

respect

nuff said.

zenodio responds:

Thanks a looot!

Nuff said...

[ParagonX9 - HyperioxX]

i like it but

as good as the piano sounds it feels REALLY out of place. I see what you were going for though with this song. I plan on playing stepmania to this. Great job as usual

[Szethius-Requiem 1.0]

hmmm

dan im gonna make my own version of this song if you dont mind, i really like the synth build up you used.

AK-Defiler responds:

Just give me credit lol

[-:YRX:-MachinRAa Black St]

ahhh

you have a great intro but there's little that motivates me to keep listening, add a hi hat line or a new bassline midway through. Perhaps a new synth. ANYTHING to add progression. Lack of climax makes this a non memorable song.

i really like the drumline though, keep it up!

YouriX responds:

thanks for the honest review. But i said this in my prev reviews that i am basicly new to making DnB so there will be mistakes!
I will take notice to your comment and see how it improves my music :)

[20thousand]

hmmm

too much ambiance in the beginning.

the drums come in very late and abruptly.

I feel like the drums and the ambient lead are fighting instead of unifying.

Feels very empty past the 2 minute mark and very repetitive. Idk its just not my thing. Not something i can imagine listening to more than once or twice without going nuts.

only thing this song has going for it is a the light drums that seem to keep it interesting.

Ending was prolonged. this should be classified as ambient, not drum-n-bass.

Your drumline really shines, but the rest is mediocre.

Ill be sure to check out your other work though.

7/10

4/5

Triskele responds:

This was done as a demo for some soundtrack work, so it's definitely meant to be ambient and unobtrusive.

Drum programming is what I really pride myself on. I'm still trying to get the rest of my skills caught up!

Thanks for the review <3

[Piano Rush]

not bad man!

i really like the progression in this song, but i feel as if there's a lack of climax, which is not necessarily needed but helps make a song more memorable. Your drums sound great but like i said i just feel there needs to be more progression through the song. Feels too simple imo; the piano just keeps going. Just my personal taste though.

4/5
8/10

td6d responds:

Thanks man, this is feedback I really like to read :)

[Burning Bright]

i love this

your bassline and tempo are in perfect union with the simple tune throughout the whole song. The chords do get a bit bland after 4minutes. There is a high pitch whine throughout the entire song and thats pretty much what is ruining it for me. Not sure if you heard it, but its rather bothersome to some with sensitive ears.

Song reminds me of nubbin. Great Job! keep up the good work, ill be looking at your other work.

Triskele responds:

I think the high pitch is a remnant of a sustained note from the tune that I cut the chime from. I'm glad I'm not the only one that noticed it, I thought I was going crazy >:

Thanks for the review! I agree that maybe I kept this one going for too long, though I still stand by my choice to not change up the chords. I wanted to keep this entrancing and ethereal, and I feel like changing up the progression would have interrupted the flow.

Thanks a lot for the review!

[You Make Me Feel Like ...]

i like it

but the panning at the beginning and end give me a huge headache.

its a very interesting song, that's for sure. Excellent job.

sorohanro responds:

If you'll have headache, you should listen to my track named "Aspirin" and then listen this one again, and again "Aspirin" and then this ... ...
Thanx for review.

[Sunscape]

ahh

this was a relaxing change from the typical drum n bass sound you hear with blaring drums and massive bass. Found this quite enjoyable, as usual. Another great song by cycerin, cheers!

[Szethius-Extraction [Draft]]

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