sounds like it was drowning out at around :50
i think just needs a bridge...a break period where you let the synths shine and then have everything come together with an awesome beat. It feels stale after awhile like you're rinsing and repeating throughout the song.
give it a beat that is more forward it seems to be more like background, which is bad for dance music.
i hope this helps!
wish i had time to review i gtg though! free 10/10!! :))))
I don't have time to respond either. thx
amazing work, i really like how you incorporate your old VG style into your newer songs, really brings back some nostalgia. I dont think this song has the same impact choaz fantasy did but thats most likely due to the similarity. Nonetheless an exceptional song!
i cant say its bad, because its not, its just not...you know... blowing me away. I really like your drum line though, very experimental and fast paced. I give it a 8/10!
but a 5/5 on voting :]
Well yes i know where your going with this. Still i am glad you took your time to review and 5vote ;)
I hope next time i blow you away!
but i dont dig the beat or the intro, but that doesnt mean its a crap song, its just not my kind of thing ya know? 9/10 for the effort though, keep it up man. Ill check out the older version.
you start with a very emotional beginning to set the mood. This almost sounds like a romantic trance piece. So far im halfway through the song... loving the progression you're adding so far (4:16). Overall a very soft trance track with great use of ..guitar? I'm very bad with instruments.
for a rose remix this was very different. The rose melody seemed to barely have a part in the entire song. Im not complaining though, i really liked what you did here.
For a trance song this really threw me off because im so used to hearing blaring bass and some overpowered synthline that gets repetitive after the 4minute mark. This is an exception to that stereotype. Excellent work!
As always, im a big fan of yours. keep it up!
romantic trance, huh? :D I never looked at it like that yet, I actually think that might work too XD. And yep, you heard a guitar ;o, an acoustic one!
And really? I put that melody everywhere in the song, albeit with very subtle change every time, but it's there a lot. :) Just not the full melody every time, otherwise it might have gotten boring ;o
Anyway thanks a lot for the kind words and review <3
im diggin it
that drum fade in is really sweet. Might use some of the techniques I've seen in this song and use them in mine if you dont mind XD
i was REALLY expecting some better buildup around 1:28-1:50 but hey, you cant please everyone i guess. Its a solid piece of audio. Great work!
Sure mate! Learn all you can! :D I support you!! Yeahh... still trying to find the time to edit and move stuff around, but i haven't had the time. But thanks for listening in on it! :D
has great potential
i really like how you incorporated the beat around the lyrics! I just think it needs a bit more polish and it'll sound really awesome. Great job! Cant wait to see the final product.
yeah its going there mate
although my computer broke down
but im getting a new one soon
this had a very different feel to it comparing it to your other songs. That's probably because of the vocals you added. Not entirely a bad thing, just feels different. Is this a final project? i would love to see this in an extended version.
as someone else said it really reminds me of pendulum. =-p love it!
yes the vocals definitely give it another vibe :3 the focus of the song was definitely more on the vocals than the backing, but add both and you get something really cool :)... vocals just give me an excuse to be a little more lazy I guess XD!~!!
Pendulum rocks!! So I'm honored by the comparison, even if we tried to get that result anyway XD
i haven't had a song i enjoyed this much in a very very long time. Such a great beat and use of piano. Very relaxing, love it!
Hey, what a great taste of music u have Mr.karlsazn!
i'm happy u found it enjoyable :)
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